Unit

It’s a drizzly night.

Seems Moldy March is hitting its stride.

I pull the bike up the curb and roll along the sidewalk, easing to stop as I lever the kickstand out.

I jump off to grab some cash from the ATM

There’s no one around

It’s late

Wait.

Actually, there is one being here

And she is a unit

Oozing out, like burger juices at the gastro pub

I first notice the shell, ringed, layered, a collection of grays and beige. Then I see his antennae.

She’s up for a walk

A stroll under the stars, in the rain

If the pavement were dry, slime trails would be left behind by this hermaphroditic gastropodic glory

I take a minute to watch her make his way toward the grass

A noble goal

I’m here, the noble, the Nobelist

Making his way

Unhurried

No pace

And, as I hop onto my bike

I give her a jaunty wave, a doff of my cap

And I wish this escargot well on their transition


Published by Radutti

Teaching in Ha Noi, screwing things up daily but surviving to write about it. ...everything's perfectly all right now. We're fine. We're all fine here now, thank you. How are you?

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    1. I didn’t mean to end the comment with that one small thing, lol. Honing in on the snail, that one very small thing, really amplifies the quiet and isolation of your quick stop for cash – made your poetry mysterious, a little ominous. I enjoyed this poem!

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  1. I get the dampness of your scene! And I had to re-read to see what you did with that hermaphroditic reality of your single unit companion.

    Finally, I have seen how large snails can be in Asia, so I am wondering how big they are?!

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  2. That snail sounded like QUITE the specimen!

    And hearing my own kids talk about things being “units,” I just had to smile. And “Oozing out like burger juices at the gastro pub…”

    Talk about an IMAGE. Loved it!

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