It’s a drizzly night.
Seems Moldy March is hitting its stride.
I pull the bike up the curb and roll along the sidewalk, easing to stop as I lever the kickstand out.
I jump off to grab some cash from the ATM
There’s no one around
It’s late
Wait.
Actually, there is one being here
And she is a unit
Oozing out, like burger juices at the gastro pub
I first notice the shell, ringed, layered, a collection of grays and beige. Then I see his antennae.
She’s up for a walk
A stroll under the stars, in the rain
If the pavement were dry, slime trails would be left behind by this hermaphroditic gastropodic glory
I take a minute to watch her make his way toward the grass
A noble goal
I’m here, the noble, the Nobelist
Making his way
Unhurried
No pace
And, as I hop onto my bike
I give her a jaunty wave, a doff of my cap
And I wish this escargot well on their transition
I love your description of the snail being ‘a unit’ – so true, when one’s home is on one’s back like that…
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I didn’t mean to end the comment with that one small thing, lol. Honing in on the snail, that one very small thing, really amplifies the quiet and isolation of your quick stop for cash – made your poetry mysterious, a little ominous. I enjoyed this poem!
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I love the minute details you noticed and the way you zoomed in and slowed down. For me, goals 🙂
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I get the dampness of your scene! And I had to re-read to see what you did with that hermaphroditic reality of your single unit companion.
Finally, I have seen how large snails can be in Asia, so I am wondering how big they are?!
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This was a big one, lol. I was like “is that a rat?”
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That snail sounded like QUITE the specimen!
And hearing my own kids talk about things being “units,” I just had to smile. And “Oozing out like burger juices at the gastro pub…”
Talk about an IMAGE. Loved it!
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