Thirds

When the waves approach

only three choices

Ride them

Slip under to let them pass

or

Get pummeled.

Alas

I don’t always know which to choose

until it’s too late



Published by Radutti

Teaching in Ha Noi, screwing things up daily but surviving to write about it. ...everything's perfectly all right now. We're fine. We're all fine here now, thank you. How are you?

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6 Comments

  1. Waves scare me. I would rather stand on the beach and scream…The watchers may have a few choices too. This slice could be about a bigger theme… just thinking.

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  2. Ah, and then the pummeling comes, doesn’t it? I remember those three choices when I was a child swimming in the Pacific in California. I did like reading it metaphorically too.

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