3 Up Top

3 up top

2 below

They’re on the move, and still, all at once

Above the waves, roiling sea below. The same powerful winds that turn the waters make moving forward a labor.

They float in air, suspended in time and space, losing this battle against progress.

And yet, something compels them to move.

Where are they headed?

My eyes track lower, to the water’s surface, and it is then that I see the solo traveler, fighting in the same direction.

Why do they fight the wind?

What if it were easy?

The fisherman, 5 shore birds, and their morning movement

Three up top

Two below

And one more, on the waves

moving

because they must

Whether fear, ambition, or something primal.

And, I wonder

if one of those reasons is why

I am compelled to do the same.



Published by Radutti

Teaching in Ha Noi, screwing things up daily but surviving to write about it. ...everything's perfectly all right now. We're fine. We're all fine here now, thank you. How are you?

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  1. Oh, this was such an intriguing post and I love that it required me to do some thinking and inferring along the way. The initial ambiguity or mystery of it added to its appeal. It definitely invites multiple readings and the underlying question will stay with me as I move through my day.

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  2. You had me guessing what the three and two were. I like how you unwrapped this gift slowly and added such a reflective finale about the one-
    “Whether fear, ambition, or something primal.

    And, I wonder

    if one of those reasons is why

    I am compelled to do the same.”

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