Elevator

Papa

Yeah bud

Who’s Miles Davis

Oh, crap.

I have clearly failed my parental music curation duties.

(So far)

I’m tempted to long wind monologue around his significance, but catch myself.

say less

show, don’t tell

I find the greatest jazz album of all time, flip on the speaker, and let music explain itself.

Upright bass enters the chat, low tones, all business.

Sax follows, grants a sense of tranquil,

and the snare undergirds with gentlest precision.

All to set the stage

for the truest, purest breaths

Who’s Miles Davis

His face registers mild shock, then pure joy as our legend ascends, and he follows the notes, Miles into the sky,

perfection,

masquerading as music.

I’m no jazz expert

but I know what I like.

And as we descend, then climb, then descend again

on this Ascenseur Pour L’echafaud

his eyes tell me,

no , -wait –

show me

everything I need to know



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  1. perfect follow-up to Say Less! And example of show, don’t tell. And what a moment with your son.

    I hate to say goodbye for a year! Consider visiting on Tuesdays…

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  2. I love this exchange…and that you are passing down your love of jazz to your little man. I noticed the repeat of ‘say less’ from a previous post. Congrats on making it to Day 31! Until next time…

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  3. I had a similar experience with my son listening to MF Doom in the car the other day. If only we could slow down time and just listen to the world’s wisdom bestowed through art. It’s too big a slice, but what you know as a parent is to share your identity openly and know that the act of knowing is to be humble in all that we don’t.

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  4. What a gorgeous tribute both to Miles and to the gift of sharing his magic with your son! Thank you, friend, for your company this month. It has been a lovely ride.

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