As we make our way through the cool evening back towards home I’m distracted,
again.
Riding a motorbike through traffic in Hanoi is today a meditation
Unfortunately when I meditate, I am often sprinting off, to another time and place
My mind is a rabbit
Darting here and there, Looking for something, not sure what
An inter-loper, loping inwardly.
It’s in that moment I look down and notice the shadows
three helmeted heads, one slightly taller than the others
The boys are really growing
And as we move through these city streets
It’s the shadows that catch my eye
Appearing with rhythm and passing by underneath street light.
Hey boys, check out our shadows
And there’s an audible
whoa
from both of them.
And I, an old man, am simultaneously transported to now, and back to those moments. When the New Thing became real. When the mundane became momentous.
And my rabbit brain slows down for a beat.
Love this line: When the mundane became momentous. And your ending line. Really beautiful!
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“Darting here and there, Looking for something, not sure what” — is a really beautiful line. That could start another poem and or story!
Lovely poem.
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This is beautiful.
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Fantastic poetry. I feel that same kind of rabbit in my head:)
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